Score: 9

"Good but not as good"

submission: the Last of the Dashkin

date: December 13, 2009

Excellent as always. The art is ridiculously beautiful. Everything is spot on.

I have a few gripes though. It seems like just an introduction, and not a story at all, but I guess that's the intent. It leaves you feeling cheated!

You also seemed to rely too much on narration. Even if it is supposed to be like a story book, it can feel redundant when the narration tells you he's secretly lonely and jealous of other animals who are together with each other, while the action on screen tells you exactly the same thing.

Score: 4

"badly executed"

submission: Pixel Grower

date: August 11, 2009

Good concept, bad execution.

1. Special pixels aren't special after level 3 or so
2. The gameplay never changes
3. All you do is move your mouse back and forth after level 3 or so. This isn't a game, it's a flash application where you move your mouse back and forth.

Score: 8

"Sound quality..."

submission: Hillside Settlement

date: July 20, 2009

The animation was really wonderful, but the sound quality is atrocious. I thought my speakers were going to explode. Please... when you do your next flash, don't compress the sound past 128kb/s.

It's the year 2009. 2.5MB vs 3.5MB is no longer an issue.

Score: 7

"bah"

submission: Dire Dire Docks (SM64)

date: November 17, 2008

To hell with people who slam zeroes and don't review...

Anyways, it sounds pretty much perfect note and timing wise. I personally disagree with the main instrument, but that's just my opinion :p

Whatever strings are in the background are awesome, but the beats are a little weak. I'd suggest making them a little stronger. If you ever want to rewrite or improve it, I'd suggest adding a bass track, as subtle or not as you want.

Also, add a proper end next time :3

Score: 10

"wow"

submission: ParagonX9 - Infiltration

date: August 21, 2008

ive been listening to your stuff since back in the old danger ahead days :p you've gotten so much better it's amazing. keep it up. and personally, i think this is better than some 'scene' stuff. :]

Score: 9

"great"

submission: Grey Sky (ambient)

date: September 1, 2007

I think its great, first song or not :D
Personally, I didn't find it very atmospheric, but it had a pretty tense tone to it.